Thursday, January 15, 2009


Gabe Boynay
January 13, 2009
Period 1, Mr. Maul




Have you ever been on a vacation that wasn’t very exciting? Felt like you ran out of things to do on the first day? And you felt bored all the time? Well Disney World is the exact opposite of boring. There will be something new and oh, so fun every day.

Finally were off our eight hour flight to Florida. I slept most of the time but it was extremely uncomfortable in those small airplane seats. Luckily my dad was behind me so I could lean back a little bit. My whole body was cramped and I needed to stretch. When we finally got all of our luggage and we went on this cool Disney world bus. The resort we stayed at was huge. They had a big pool and like three different restraints inside the resort. The room we stayed in was also pretty big. That’s just the start.

We went to magic kingdom, which is pretty much as big as Disney land. And there were four more parks just like this. The first ride we went on was Space Mountain, and it was very exciting. The best part was that there were only a couple people at the ride so we got to ride it two more times. The shops were huge too, and they were all filled amazing products. Unfortunately they cost a lot more money hear because you’re buying from Disney world not some online website or an airport store. But I saved up my money, and was able to buy some pretty cool souvenirs.

The rides were by far the best part of the trip. My favorite would probably have to be the Rockin Rollercoaster. You went from zero to sixty in a matter of seconds. Your stomach drops immediately, and then you went straight in a barrel roll which was adrenaline pumping. At one of the water parks there was as slide called Summit Plummit. You dropped straight down a hundred and forty feet. That was by far the most exciting ride at the water park. But the only down-side you got a humongo wedgie.


2 comments:

Paul Mauel said...

Gabe, really good introduction. An example from which other students can learn. Attaway, good effort, Mr. Mauel

Rachel said...

That was a really good essay for your intro and conclusion you kept my attension the whokle time!! :)
hows it going!